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Corner Story by ~santy:iconsanty:



Concrete angels
And gargoyle guards -
Damnation sits
right in your front yard.
You curved your hip
Into that mold,
Bared your arms
Against the cold,
For the flickering streetlamp
And this street corner,
Only a line of metal
To make you warmer.
There's no picket fence
No bed cover to hide;
Your soul is the city
But it's eating you alive.
Don't say
It wasn't worth it
That might make it true
And we both know, sweetheart,
There's not much you can do
Besides pound the pavement,
Hope for a ride;
No more friends
(with wings)
By your side.
In stone that sings,
In glass that glares,
It's almost as if
You were never there,
Following street lines
Under your feet
Keeping in mind
That this is your beat -
What you can loose,
What you can give -
This conflict of interest
Eating at your skin.
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:iconnakatsuki:
This in a way reminds me of Supernatural, with the sense of not having anyone by your side anymore, and the darkness. I really like (I loves bad grammar) . Does it happen to go along with one of your other stories ?

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You know, I'm not half as exciting in person as I am when my identity is an icon.
:iconcystic-cynic:
:) glad to see you are still here, and still doing quality work!

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Asinine contradictions flooded with psychotropia.
Sublime festering of my raped confidence.
Watch the ripples in my reflection swirl and entwine,
and like a virus, I infect, corrupt and sever.
:iconsanty:
I'm glad you really like. :) And now that you point it out - yeah, I can see Supernatural fitting into this actually, given Sam and Dean's current predicament (thank God for continued seasons...). Maybe I was subconsciously channelling the show? Wouldn't surprise me. But at the moment, no, it isn't really going along with anything I've been writing story wise. I've been thinking of starting something though.

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"FINE. The idiot with the blood fetish can stay under ONE condition!"
"And that would be...?"
"No more eating the friggin' neighbors!"
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Memeber of the zodiac club and UnseenArtists
:iconsanty:
Thanks! And same here. :) I've been away for a while so I really should check out what you've got done too.

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"FINE. The idiot with the blood fetish can stay under ONE condition!"
"And that would be...?"
"No more eating the friggin' neighbors!"
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Memeber of the zodiac club and UnseenArtists
:iconnakatsuki:
Theres another poetry contest by the Poetry Institute for all ages, the deadline is soon. You should enter this.

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You know, I'm not half as exciting in person as I am when my identity is an icon.
:iconsanty:
Seriously? Hmmmmm, maybe I shall. *goes off to check out*

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"FINE. The idiot with the blood fetish can stay under ONE condition!"
"And that would be...?"
"No more eating the friggin' neighbors!"
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Memeber of the zodiac club and UnseenArtists

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